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First - original copy

Second - new copy

CHANGES THAT I’VE MADE -

So, basically, you can see that the original copy of the poster is not very well designed and pasted. The information is randomly pasted onto the poster making it look messy and incomprehensible. Sometimes it is really difficult to understand what the original author is trying to inform his audience. The modifications I made is to place the title at the top of the page. Which makes it easy for people to known immediately what kind of a poster is he/she looking at.  Also, the author was comparing the weapons used in World War One, by the Central and Allied Power. He has got good information, however the whole poster needs to be redesigned. First, I divided the poster into threes. The first is the weapons used by the Central Power, the information and graph. The second category I placed the important terms, introduction and bibliography. Then the third category is the Allied Power weapons. graphs and information. Then I included only a picture. (Not to make the poster too messy). Also I made borders around the text and titles to make it more attention grabbing and interesting. It would be easier to read.

So, that’s basically it.